I am submitting my story in order to get opinions, pure and simple.
This is a fan-fic project I have been working on for a while and I felt it was time to start getting some real critique on my work.
Plus, it just didn't seem fair to have access to the intellectual work and ideas of so many other fine artists without putting my own out there as well.
First off, other than some very minor references, mostly in backstory details that aren't necessarily in the actual text of the story, I have written this story from an exclusive perspective. This to say that I don't try very hard to make the situation presented fit in with any other particular fanfics out there. If it makes you comfortable to think "AU", please do so, because I am not about to say my idea is any more 'valid' than anyone elses, this is just my own story. Second, I do try and write this story from the prespective that it occurs concurrently to what takes place within the series, both making overt references as well as trying to fit the timeline in subtly with what was shown.
Hopefully you'll enjoy what I've written, if not, please, let me know, either way, reviews are encouraged and highly desired. If I reply to one, understand, I know I sometimes come across as curt, but I don't intend to, I appreciate fully any and all replies. If I offer a rebuttal to any statements or questions you offer, it is not to try and show that you are somehow 'wrong', but merely to explain my own thought process involved in the prespective I offer.
See: WSG 1
If interested, I invite you to check out some of the associated graphics at deviantArt. Any questions you may have on what I have posted there I also freely ask you to direct them my way.